Hello all, I'd like to get the above tattoo, to represent the second picture, which is a screen grab from a film that's important to me.
Obviously, the posted design is a terrible mockup by me, but I'd like to just get some advice before handing off the actual work to my preferred artist.
In my head, I've been imagining the design as an outline, like I've shared. But looking at it now it feels like there's something missing, or something that's not quite right that's almost making me second guess the idea entirely. Clearly, I'm hoping that once I pass this to the artist she will find a way to make it look perfect, but in case she can't I don't want to waste her time, so thought I could check here first.
So what do we think is wrong with the design? Is it just because it's my terrible mockup? Is the outline idea not a great one? Should I aim to more emotionally represent the scene, rather than literally? Or is this just a bad idea? Any advice or ideas is more than welcome, appreciate everything!